DIY 澳洲MASTER申请全程文书及细节
2004年12月初我收到了澳洲Macquarie University 的Letter of Offer, 在此为了曾经帮助过我的朋友们，我也贡献出我的经历，供想去澳洲的同仁们参考。$ Y3 r, g/ |5 P P; e% r$ _* x6 S
我在大学里学的是法学，但是是理科学校的法学，不是太好。而且我也发现学得太泛了，反而什么也不会，于是我想换专业。我到Macquarie University 学得是Master of Accounting (CPA Extension )。当初选这个专业的原因是它不要专业背景，而且Macquarie University 的会计很不错。5 f: o3 F% r" d% |1 U
1. Cover Letter: {0 h) J, O" Q/ M1 N) k
这个不是最重要的，但是寄的时候它是放在最上面的。这个的例子我想大家都看了不少了，在这里我只给大
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/ x5 q3 V2 x" p0 G% B Name
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P. R. China$ B- w% Y) z+ P$ K5 {' s
Tel: 86-28-XXXXXXXX& I7 M" R* b+ v1 S+ Y
E-mail: ( o" G- v' s, s- F
Nov. 20th, 2004
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Dear Sir or Madam:6 J: h6 m6 B/ U$ ?0 L% r
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$ X+ X) v2 Y3 Q) L; M" H9 ]Enclosed are following items of my application materials:
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$ U6 F" }. {& h* u; Y1. Postgraduate Application Form -- completed in the China International Education Expo 2004, Chengdu on Nov. 4th, 2004.
9 U+ m2 \9 e5 ]9 ` e2. Macquarie University International Scholarship Application Form -- completed
- u$ Z* q# w7 O( t! }3. Degree Certificate and Diploma (Chinese Copy) -- signed in the China International Education Expo 2004, Chengdu on 2 \# M; ]1 B1 i _0 k5 V; F
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4. a copy of official transcript and Degree Certificate and Diploma from XXXX University -- in sealed envelope.9 {; k1 g3 O- i" N. D$ ^
5. the Certification of Rank and Grade Point Average from the Faculty of Humanities and Law of XXXX University : }4 g* |2 A9 \& l7 Q& l
6. a copy of IELTS Score Report -- 7.5, signed in the China International Education Expo 2004, Chengdu on Nov. 4th, 2004.+ T0 w- L8 }3 F& }% D5 N
7. a curriculum vitae ; |. J$ M2 X! y, U7 U
8. a Personal Statement1 k4 K9 x& ^9 t5 Q" `4 O: Z
9. two additional Letters of Recommendation besides the required two Academic Referee’ Reports -- in sealed envelopes
h2 p; {$ K# O3 L10. a copy of TOEFL ( paper-based ) Score Record -- 647/ W0 l# u/ Q7 ~
11. a copy of certificate of 2003 National English Contest -- Third Prize
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Thank you very much for reviewing my application materials. If you need any other information or materials, please let me4 W9 `* U: w* m) r
know promptly.
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# J1 A s+ g& L' \" E& @+ H; ^; @ Sincerely yours,
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P.S. The application fee was waived in the China International Education Expo 2004 Chengdu on Nov. 4th, 2004.
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- k# y) s' \& G; X2 A: \我的Cover Letter 和别人的基本没什么区别，但是我在这页纸上加了页眉：
3 A! z$ K/ X" F6 qCOVER LETTER FOR MACQUARIE UNIVERSITY
+ t7 M. B# l- }/ w2 E' s其他学校也是一样做一个页眉。没别的，只是为了别致一些。还有Sincerely yours,后的名字一定要手签，不要打印。这样基本就没问题了。 由于我的好多中文资料已经在教育展上被看过了，所以才有第3项和其他的说明。
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0 s- o/ B, o: _# o; ]! i这个只要真实的填就好了，不用全部大写，用不用黑的笔也无所谓。我在教育展上填的，用的是蓝色圆珠笔，其他的学校也是提供的蓝色圆珠笔。不过如果是你自己从网上下载的表来填，那就照要求吧。不过用不着用Adobe Acrobat 6.0 Professional 来填。如果你要申请美国的学校，听说必须用Adobe Acrobat 6.0 Professional。申请澳洲就别麻烦了。我的Macquarie University International Scholarship Application Form就是用Adobe Acrobat 6.0 Professional填的，太费时/事了。到处去找Adobe Acrobat 6.0 Professional下，下到了还不知怎么用，又试了好久，终于搞定了。打出来的确很漂亮，可花的时间不知是手填的多少倍。如果你也像我这样执著，又有时间，也可以用。如果你试了半天也不知道怎么用，就发信到zoeloveroy@sohu.com吧，请在标题中说明，要不然我就当垃圾邮件删了，谢了。: W; C, d- [0 Y3 T
还有填电话时，中国的区号是86，然后后面的各地区号要去掉0。比如成都的区号是028，填的时候要填成28，即5 C1 e1 l& v: C H3 `7 z% s
86-28-XXXXXXXX。可能这个大家都已经知道了，可是当初填的时候我不知道，后来还要把0划去，挺不美观的。 4 L I1 P+ M2 L9 Z& ~ W; W
8 E% b. r# |; Y) s' t: _3. 成绩单和学位证、毕业证
- h6 _/ N# H5 y" } A" j) t r很多人都说必须要公证的，其实完全不用。不过签证时学位和毕业证要公证，反正要公证，你可以先在申请时就公证。不过我申请时都没有公证。, f3 M9 S$ u+ ^3 V7 l+ K
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我的成绩单的英文是自己翻的，有的是学校给翻，都没关系。不过所有学校给这种成绩单盖章都要收钱，我们学校的是10元一份。成绩单要用印有学校名称的航空信封装，如果没有印有学校名称的航空信封，印有校名的国内普通信封也行，但是密封章信封的两头都要盖。航空信封只有一个开口，当然只盖一个密封章就够了。 注意成绩单是中文一份，英文一份。在信封正面可以贴上打印的标签，表明这个信封里装的是什么。因为加上推荐信，这个申请包里会出现好多个信封，贴个标签可以方便别人。3 ?/ |; S# h& }" M, b6 u# I
标签的格式：
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5 U/ ?8 f% h- `1 H% AName: XX No: XXXXXXXX Faculty: Humanities and Law ) x' b9 M" Y, ?5 p6 ?
Major: Law School Year: Four Years Class: 00012 ~: q [; G2 Z5 C
" Z `% R4 {$ ^4 p( K标签千万别用手写，一定要打印出来。简单的方法是在一张纸上打印好多份，再裁成小条，用胶水贴在信封上。你要不嫌麻烦也可以直接把信封放进打印机里，设置好也可以打出来。还有，标签的字体一定要和成绩单的一致，用的是Times New Roman就都用Times New Roman。虽然是小细节，可是有时也蛮重要的。
6 v$ Y" b# Y: V, M! [关于成绩单的格式，你可以到学校的教务处去问问，如果学校有规定，就按规定，如果没有你就自己设计，但最好都集中在一页上，即中文成绩单一页，英文的一页，因为有些学校是按章的个数收钱的。当然有些学校教务处是给你打印出来了，那样更好。( g& A3 V7 ~+ Q8 h) x
我是学法的，所以在这里只能提供法学科目的翻译了。/ R7 `5 j ~8 _
英语精读-- College English
- S) O7 t" n- w: x$ B8 P1 N' B英语听力-- English Listening Comprehension
% s) N# m) y! U/ R. N毛泽东思想概论-- Introduction to Mao Zedong’s Thoughts! @ u7 b. S) Q0 H
中国法制史-- Chinese Legal History
' x5 ^4 J8 L9 \+ T中国宪法学-- Chinese Constitutional Law' X' i6 L+ U: }5 ^) ]
法理学-- Jurisprudence
! e& K9 D0 R: F* @经济应用数学-- Applied Economic Mathematics
, x& D( I& H2 ~( S3 o形式逻辑-- Logics$ Z7 t" s5 K; |, X
大学语文-- College Chinese! k/ j+ J( u8 m, r) s1 S1 d
思想品德-- Ethical Education D. y# \/ O; l% P( [
体育-- Physical Education
& y' }+ I$ [0 h7 i/ ?! b书法-- Calligraphy6 L2 k9 ?; ?. h( W; a( N
民法-- Civil Law
: _$ P7 I+ m* s$ l0 }3 {3 F刑法-- Criminal Law3 ]; D/ T: F1 l+ q4 t. o
马克思主义哲学-- Philosophy of Marxism, [; h* t) ]; \5 L- P( U6 E* P
现代科学技术概论-- Introduction to Modern Science and Technology
$ `( `' ]8 `1 Y2 r6 v8 {4 `军事理论-- Military Theory
4 A/ k4 Q% @/ ?' {9 n6 d计算机文化基础-- Basic Application of Computer$ g3 t0 a1 Z& d1 j) q' D' U
应用文写作-- Practical Writing7 {2 ~2 V: K) B! f7 [" P1 I6 {
西方法律思想史-- Western History of Legal Thoughts
6 k& }/ K! J0 `% e3 v" i社会学-- Sociology
9 f! q3 r* |' l5 b化学与社会-- Chemistry and Society
( g- }; Q; d; i/ z+ t绘画-- Drawing
# e: n+ O7 ]- }) S! M, W民事诉讼法-- Civil Procedure Law0 t' M3 y1 Y. S" x+ h/ F
政治经济学-- Political Economics
7 g! x/ v" I' K( @0 E经济法-- Economic Law
) \5 W) M6 P. Z法医学-- Legal Medicine
$ a. l3 j$ N3 x( Q0 l' _8 p8 t中国法律思想史-- Chinese History of Legal Thoughts
( F9 _- T% z. Q' s经济学原理-- Principles of Economics% @0 u4 b: x1 t6 y4 z" O, w9 J
认知实习-- Cognition Practice( W! j1 @/ M2 S' O& L
当代世界政治与经济-- Contemporary World Politics and Economy2 k$ F; N4 h! X H/ X- t
刑事诉讼法-- Criminal Procedure Law
9 ^* i2 Y6 b. s. r1 ]% [证据学-- Law Science of Evidence
% k, _. {: P) X$ U婚姻法与继承法-- Law of Marriage and Succession ?. u+ v( y. J% J
文献检索-- Bibliography& ?8 Q7 ^8 Z, _2 e' z
英语四级-- CET-4
! Y3 Y1 }; O a' d3 v9 ~传统中国-- Traditional China& A; Q1 B3 ~, w6 x/ [# K
邓小平理论概论-- Introduction to Deng xiaoping’s Theories
* h% `. O/ M6 s, P0 t u国际法-- International Law
' r7 C6 p2 B% L合同法-- Contract Law9 a. p: E! D" r. T1 p9 f1 f5 M
司法文书-- Judicial Documents1 @, B, l6 x: x& V* x6 P' r5 o
会计学原理-- Principles of Accounting
$ ~( B/ @" Z/ j英语六级-- CET-6, s9 c1 p3 e" v; y, Q9 n( A1 C
期货市场-- Futures Markets F7 s: y' v* G
学年论文-- Seminar Thesis
! k/ i" v0 [% d7 ]: J. u$ B4 F国际私法-- International Private Law
, j: l& m- z$ W; Y+ U行政与行政诉讼法-- Administrative Law
$ K. B" f9 Q7 Y& ^' ]1 e" U国际经济法-- International Economical Law/ k) N) S! N+ s- u4 F; }; }
外国法制史-- Foreign Legal History
# D) H. m, }! d7 F/ u劳动法与社会保障法-- Labor Law and Social Security Law( }4 u7 P9 N1 N. f$ D
证券期货法-- Law of Securities and Futures& c- D4 t A( G0 b) |$ }) j) D1 ]
房地产法-- Real Estate Law1 K6 K( F! z6 n; n$ r7 M' C, B) Q
竞争法-- Anti-unfair Competition Law0 \0 ` i, o/ p1 W
商法案例分析-- Analysis of Commercial Cases
$ o. K1 r+ ], U+ Q) `* H仲裁法-- Arbitration Law8 A- ]+ C/ m9 c) Y; t8 `% v4 G
知识产权法-- Intellectual Property Law
. u. L6 l0 b% W. E! \法律英语-- Legal English
+ r f7 a8 k6 l: ?环保法-- Environmental Law
6 i; L) E) I" }: c税法-- Taxation Law
1 N! L9 R" Z) l- r2 B2 F毕业实习-- Legal Internship
+ y* ]4 ?, t4 k6 a; [1 @" u毕业论文-- Graduation Thesis0 f, h0 _4 R) z/ _- ~+ J' P
成绩单下面还应有一些注解，如：1 R' i7 v5 v; d$ }0 x4 u
备注：1. 优 = 90 - 100，良= 80 - 89，中 = 70 - 79，及格 = 60 - 69
q- a" b( K4 s/ B4 J& D0 k* s- @2. GPA算法：90 - 100 = 4，80 - 89 = 3，70 - 79 = 2，60 - 69 = 1 , {5 K+ O, d+ X9 y5 j4 W; I
3. *为选修课，其成绩分为合格与不合格两种- h! o5 x( F) P8 `. a' x
Note: 1. A = 90 - 100, B = 80 - 89, C = 70 - 79, D= 60 – 69: w7 [5 L/ U |2 w7 T
2. GPA: 90 - 100 = 4, 80 - 89 = 3, 70 - 79 = 2, 60 - 69 = 1
: I, r" U$ t8 I8 i: L9 v! V: M) k3. ﹡means selective courses, which are evaluated by qualified (Q) and unqualified (U)
5 b2 @" x, o- E- p& i 各个学校的规定不同，看自己学校的规定吧。如果学校太懒了，什么都要你自己做，你可以参见《北美留学一路通》（李强编著，新华出版社，2001年版）P78-81的成绩单。看了那么多成绩单，这个是最好的例子。又详细，又省地方，如果我们学校没有规定的格式，我就用这个了。
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! E' p1 G! P; o0 L( o9 X3 j0 _7 f- @ 你要是先公证了，那在这里就不说了。我下面要讲讲学校开的证明。我们学校的规定是盖一个学校的章是10块钱。我刚开始不知道那么贵所以就按原尺寸复印了学位证和毕业证，然后翻译了这两个证，分别打在两页A4纸上，那一份学位证和毕业证就有4页纸，每页都要盖章，一份就要40元，太贵了。幸亏盖章的老师人好，她给我看了看别人做的样本，一页纸就搞定。下面我就来教教大家，就是做起来有点麻烦。
+ B- U6 F5 f3 T 首先，把一张A4的纸如下图1.平均分为4部分（A、B、C、D），然后把你的学位证和毕业证缩印成A和C的尺寸，分别贴在A、C处。
5 m. M" J7 u% n- u 然后把学位证和毕业证翻译好，打在A4 纸上。记住，一定要加边框。接着在把打印出来的两个证缩印成B、D的尺寸分别贴在B、D处。或者打印的时候就只打出那么大一块，再裁出来分别贴在B、D处。注意字尽量打大一些，免得复印时印不清楚。' }3 _5 l, B7 t* K3 v
最后把A、B、C、D都贴满的A4 纸再复印一次，就做好了。剩下的就是在中间E的位置盖上学校的章。边框这时就很重要了，因为章要改在四个角上。
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Certificate of a Bachelor Degree# M, ~5 C5 V' ~$ Q+ _$ Y1 _; x/ A: m" `
（English Copy）
; l0 J( J4 N% C6 A9 _2 vXX, female/male, born on XXXX, XXXX, has completed courses of study in the Department of XXXX of XXXX University,
3 V) Q. t# C9 ^% d! x. Omajoring in Law during September 2000 to July 2004. Thereupon, she/he was approved to graduate from the university.
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Having been verified, it also conforms to “the Requirements of the Regulations regarding the Academic Degree of the8 z4 x* S+ X$ d; B$ c$ p
People’s Republic of China”. She/He is conferred upon the Degree of Bachelor of Law.! b" {9 P4 g9 a4 I, u/ Z9 t+ S
3 V- R6 Q2 A4 Z6 {/ o) V2 QNo. XXXXXXXXX
0 W$ P" W# T, e" t1 ~Date: July 2nd, 2004
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; t- y0 J4 J0 o% V+ N: `) TXX, female/male, born on XXXX, XXXX, was an undergraduate student majoring in Law in the Department of Humanities and Law of XXXX University during September 2000 to July 2004. She/He has completed all the prescribed four-year
8 q6 s* ~% p& K8 s7 cundergraduate courses, passed all the examinations and is entitled to be a graduate of XXXX University.
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No .XXXXXXXXXXXX Date: July 2nd, 2004" ]8 N( z4 X+ E( ^( i* Y
H( d+ t# }4 i' y, l9 y" J$ ?如果成绩单和学位证、毕业证都是在学校盖章的，可以封在一个信封里，盖上密封章，不用再分开装了。
, ^ L f# j. n3 }3 x; |后来签证的时候做了公证件，可能公证处翻的更好吧。我也把他们翻的列在下面，大家可以参考。7 r/ z5 H- s' y& D! A ]
Certificate of Bachelor’s Degree) n B$ q: n+ ]7 I
(Graduation from Regular Program for General Higher Education)/ M* M+ I4 j3 a
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( v, i, z3 O$ M9 |( R/ `, U" \XX, male/female, born on XX XX 19XX, finishing his/her studies for the four-year undergraduate program in the specialty of
& w9 |' D) Y- uLaw at Humanities & Law Department of XXXX University from September 2000 to July 2004, has already graduated. He/She is awarded Bachelor’s Degree of Art after verified according to the Regulation of the People’s Republic of China on Academic Degree./ k! x$ D$ _3 \" U3 m0 e
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Chairman of the Committee of Academic Degree Assessment: XXX
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2nd July 20041 E" d5 y8 Z$ ?4 e
Certificate No.: XXXXXXXXXXX
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& k/ b+ S8 e! z6 x7 Z: w% y* a$ w Graduation Certificate 6 c0 b. A- N0 `! B+ S/ s0 s$ s
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Student XX, male/female, born on XX XX 19XX, having studied in four-year undergraduate program in the specialty of Law/ i5 H* ]4 I$ T! a
at Humanities & Law Department in this university from September 2000 to July 2004, and has completed all the regulated2 Z/ W% ]5 D- r! A: I$ P
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Certificate No.: XXXXXXXXXXX 2nd July 20040 ?, ^. l6 L7 s& P- f' G; T: E) O
注意：Photograph 周围的框是像一个一寸照片那么大的，不是我画的那么小。（我不知道怎么用WORD把那个框画成那样）6 _# Z; y# r' N3 ]) o5 u
1 b1 y8 C3 P' `4.排名和平均分1 n7 f {7 l8 N, z8 b8 C+ J4 y" @
这个部分不是人人都需要的。因为我大一有两门课考得不好，但是我的年级排名还是很不错的，为了不让那两门课的成绩影响我的录取，我才做了这个。还有，澳洲的学校的要求中有平均分要求。你可以让他们根据你成绩单上的成绩来算，也可以在成绩单最后注明，也可以专门做一个这个证明，特别是系里盖章不收钱时（我们系就是，只要写明用途，让负责人签字就行）。
' k% b S$ I2 M7 M我的例子：
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Signature of Student: ___________________________ Date: ________________________
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5 N: e9 s9 D) `9 X2 rRANK IN DEPARTMENT:
' f, i- U' F9 \: B& UThis is to certify that Ms. /Mr.________ exactly ranked the _______ from the top in the Department of _____among ______students at the end of her /his academic year in 2004.
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This is to certify that Ms. /Mr.________’ s cumulative grade point average was_____（%） at the end of her /his academic year in 2004.
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注意， 这其中除了签名和日期外都应打印出来。还有打印的纸最好用带有系或学校信头的纸，如果实在没有可以自己做一个，用彩色打印机打出来。具体做法在推荐信那部分教大家。
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* v7 s% F5 U4 F: D9 K& @5. 雅思成绩单
* s+ \3 q5 l! e [这个根据各学校的要求来做。不过除了前8的某几所以外，其他学校只要复印件就够了。你可以在申请包中寄复印件，如果学校非要原件不可，他会发信告诉你，倒时再寄也不迟（不过最好在考后3个月内）。一般的情况是复印件就足够了。
+ z3 x: k- [ u, ^3 ^- x3 c关于怎么给学校寄原件，领成绩单时有一张说明会告诉你，这里就不说了。
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0 y" {) K* G* ^! Y1 C7 f- S W+ C这个应该很好写，但不要太长，控制在两页以内。* _. Z) p! h5 p) g* ?- [, ]
我的简历格式：
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Name：
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Health: Excellent8 q$ p( Z; k" d$ e4 g8 @8 A
Date of Birth: 2 c8 K' q; i f1 G+ _
Citizenship: Chinese. {8 P# X2 Y, D1 N8 Y
Languages: Chinese and English, fluent in spoken and written9 e$ }) N, R: u/ S4 k' G: A, B
Address:
% d+ F" V1 k! I4 hTelephone: 86 - 28 – ; O) ^3 Z0 t8 M$ L- r+ r
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( I' s/ J1 b& n2 J) UEDUCATIONE
- x1 N' ?& J) b& ]3 @! hBachelor of Law, XXXX University July 2004
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RELATED COURSE WORK6 K) E, |" B( I4 L
Civil Law, Criminal Law, Commercial Law, Corporation Law, Contract Law, International Economic Law, Intellectual Property
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HONOURS AND ACTIVITIES / F: |' H' ]4 \
Recipient of People Scholarship for the undergraduate, XXXX University 2001-2004( {7 F) W1 D" ~' u6 t* \" b& X: O, F
Recipient of Cheng Yuan Scholarship, XXXX University 2003 3 F. W7 P! d" H7 S0 a8 s
Third Prize, National English Contest for College Students 2003
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Counselor, Consulting Service Activity in the community 2001-2003
2 ^! R5 R" z9 `, `* r* ?Member, Model Court Club, XXXX University 2000-2003
2 J( o0 x1 h S! e$ ~4 H5 dMember, Comic Club, XXXX University 2000-2002
7 L' V+ g( u" \) \Founder &. Art Editor, Nong Chao Literature Club, XXXX University 2000-20023 d9 v( a: Z) O+ U) W8 d3 o3 ?
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ENGLISH ACHIEVEMENT; o: s$ f$ ?$ k/ p% Y8 h
7.5 IELTS Oct.2004
. Z- B9 l$ D" S* l915 TOEIC Dec.2003; b4 E3 ^+ \% v" @+ t5 _7 J0 Y
Level Two Professional English Proficiency Dec.2003
9 r2 N4 H) d1 A+ B/ ?: t647 TOEFL Oct.20037 z4 O( S; j1 h5 G4 C2 h5 C e" I* V
84（%） College English Test Band 6 (CET-6) Jan.2003
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English Trainer Apr. 2004 – July. 2004/ d) r. R" x. Q2 e. m" M
YOUR ENGLISH SERVICE
1 Q" L: z) K- N5 M0 H) a8 CIntern Legal Assistant Feb. 2004 - Mar. 2004
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8 D+ ~+ _+ @ F9 D0 rEnglish Teaching Assistant summer/winter vacations, 2002-2004 0 u3 I* T& r: [- G( l+ o# O$ Q' @
Beijing Yuncol Network Training School : x; o3 u# Z% r/ b+ N0 b
English Tutor 2001-2004
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- ]& Y$ V w0 O/ t! P! FIntern Clerk summer vacation, 2001
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MS Word MS PowerPoint MS Excel MS Internet Explorer8 G& I2 ^/ O- H9 ` G7 V" x
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3 h) X- J9 ]" s6 ~8 _3 f qCalligraphy, Comic, Sketch,
, k, y' q6 S# f7 ^4 Y$ fCycling, traveling, reading, Language studies, etc.
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注意：1. 姓名和e-mail等你认为重要的信息可以加粗以强调。& @8 t. Z6 j) Q2 r; C R+ f5 S5 P
2. 在最后加上Signature: Date: ，并用手写填上，显得很别致。
2 P; P1 C: i0 N" l$ i: o 3. 简历和个人陈述是很个性化的材料，你可以选择你觉得好看的字体，别老局限在Times New Roman。我推荐的字体是Verdana和Arial，这两种都挺好看的，而且据说外国人很喜欢。 / l7 i' o% K5 n. ^# H. v& J( i& L) l
) t4 x0 x2 a3 E! z& i7 O$ ^7. 个人陈述4 y( P. @& I) a+ t2 m
这个就得根据个人情况自己慢慢写了。我大概写了两周，写得很痛苦。我的经验就是多看看别人的例子。我买了好几本书来参考，觉得最有用的是新东方出国留学系列的《留学申请个人陈述写作模板》（包凡一编著，世界图书出版公司出版，2003版）。" D) O2 l3 m5 s
我的个人陈述：
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8 J. u J/ {! b5 l# N6 Z& tIn my desk drawer, beneath stacks of books and stationery, is a small saving box with a lock on it. In it are the “slips of my wishes and dreams”. I have kept it for more than sixteen years. It was a birthday present from my parents when I was % A u e; B+ e& x9 r4 b+ X
seven. Originally, with the hope that I could learn the spirit of frugality they advised me to save part of my pocket money in its abdomen for better utilities later. As a curious kid, however, I spent every coin I had to try whatever intrigued me, a " \5 H+ B7 q; D" c% J
colorful pencil, a new type of candies, and never dropped one coin into it. Instead, with an inspiration one day, I started & U3 {/ ^1 d0 J. g
the habit of writing all the things I wanted most out of life down on slips of paper and stuffing them into this empty box. Till ( }- C: U( @! `1 D. }
now, I can not remember how many wishes and dreams I have saved in it for I forget the keys after I tried to put it away
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9 [4 j, A5 y: s2 |Last Saturday, just after I accomplished my IELTS test, I was putting all the materials about IELTS into my bookcase and
" m' ~3 q A" i/ c; [suddenly I touched a hard and cold metal piece under a pack of old textbooks. Excitedly and anxiously, I unlocked my
! L9 M' K7 v2 s, I Qsaving box with it. I pulled out all slips and reviewed them one by one with tears streaming down my cheeks. I embarked on a wonderful journey of recalling - “I wish I could go to Tsinghua University.” “I want to buy daddy a B.M.W..” “I want to be a psychologist.” “I want to be an excellent lawyer.” “I want to be an accountant.” … Every slip has a story behind and
8 W6 c. ~: ~7 o' g6 v- Q* qthese stories are indispensable components of my life.- e1 N- f, l2 ^- J+ X6 m
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“I want to be a psychologist.”
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an emptiness in the pit of the stomach, always seeking the so-called meaning of life and searching for one’s identity, these
/ V4 C% p: y* ?: Ware symptoms I had when I was sixteen and seventeen. I retreated far into myself and suffered a lot from that experience. What I remembered vividly is the time I was standing on the rooftop, watching the advent of the dusk. The sky was
/ R4 k4 v+ d2 [$ Schanging from blue to gray, then to mauve, and finally velvet black whereas the lights behind the windows were kindled one by one. There, behind every bright window, existed an ordinary soul and I was just one of them. Sentimentally, with sorrow and void, I believed I was just an unnoted atomy in the boundless universe and wonder what I was able to achieve
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With great efforts and a long period of time, finally, I overcame the depression and struggled to fulfill my studies. Later on, after watching some television programs about psychology and talking to my friends, I found this feeling was just the ' }7 R/ V2 I: f/ C$ e( m" t# l
symptom of depression and most teenagers were bound to experience it within a long or short time, depending on their , \" q$ d" e, W
personalities, abilities to deal with pressures and so on. Unfortunately, every year, because of the depression, some 2 M) H, m- |3 I- X6 n* q
teenagers commit suicides. Once a victim myself, I felt it was my mission to help them out. With this in mind, I determined to be a psychologist for it was the simplest and easiest way to meet them and help alleviate all the sufferings they had to
% o. a5 ~" }/ b" z* A: e8 ^& J, Aendure. Looking back on the past, this experience promised to be a highlight of my young life and a blessing in disguise.
! i/ D. K) {* j, X: g; O7 B+ C- }I finally realized “Life is a succession of lessons which must be lived to be understood.” and grew a stronger heart. I believe
M9 J, d) i [; v7 mthe hardship I was faced with as a youngster accelerated my maturity and greatly influenced my vast determination to 5 S! [' x" a# f
succeed. Most importantly, however, is that I learned effective interpersonal communication skills and the ability to adapt & z+ y A6 S$ n! e9 ~: Q. N
myself to harsh situations, which have proven to be essential part of survival today. Now, having undergone the tough test of life, I can swear with confidence that when confusion and chaos appear to reign supreme in my life again, when I face 2 y! ]4 [0 K0 m; Z \
mountains of challenges once more, I will overcome them and stand above them among the clouds and stars.
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Due primarily to its respectable career prospect, my parents made a critical decision for me that I had to go to a Law School. For me, at that time the only thing I knew about the laws and lawyers was the dribs and drabs from some television serials. As soon as I started to study the Jurisprudence in the first semester my expectation about the law was spoiled by crushing disappointment because in the preface of this textbook, a quotation shocked me. It says “The nature of the law is against
' @7 S* U% ?; y p& @# y2 Vall the romantic, interesting and novel ways of thinking.” I always considered myself to be an ingenious and innovative 7 p; x$ v8 V) z0 H9 A4 b% a( U
creature and even in times of pain and loss in the High School, I did not give up these talents and felt proud of them. 4 a$ s& B# q* P2 X' e3 V: H; @- K2 M
Owing to this inimical mood, I obtained very low score in my course of Jurisprudence and Chinese Constitutional Law in the
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% ^3 `. X. n1 k: m/ Y3 mHowever boring I thought the law would be, as a student, I had no other choice, only to study it and take great efforts to
9 x. p% H* q. G- ustudy it. With time, my huge endeavor resulted in remarkable progress. Except the first semester, I had been the recipient
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it. Based on the combined strength of legal theories and cases, sociology, commerce, economics etc. my major possesses 1 G) Z# i( D _) H& k0 |
an interdisciplinary nature. I found this genre of studies did away with the narrow-mindedness inherent in the pursuit of
7 t. ~# I6 s, l( y! {studies in a single area and the extensive knowledge provided me with a solid foundation upon which to prepare for a
6 Q) R( k' U6 Y9 S7 K5 _qualified lawyer. Later, having been an intern legal assistant in a Law Firm and acquired some experience in a local court, I - a: ^; k1 S) R+ x6 |3 Q. E
discovered that being a lawyer was a challenging and richly rewarding experience. Through the course of seeking clues, I
6 q9 X; w+ l/ x" N$ Z$ ]; V1 kcould meet people from various backgrounds and encounter anything beyond a common person’s imagination. Although
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7 f) U8 [3 d' @“I want to be an accountant.”
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This idea came to my mind just one year ago. Although, my mother has been an accountant in a government agency for F4 j+ |3 k7 \1 B& _
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! a% G0 c7 @2 B# G& j# V) b! valways maintain that spending the whole life with numbers, the accountant is an extremely monotonous and tedious job. I
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importantly, one who is able to develop his expertise in other relevant field, such as accounting. His advice helped to shape my career choice in Accounting. My fundamental knowledge towards this subject enabled me to learn it quickly and to push myself forward to advanced theories. As I became more and more involved in my course, I found accounting was not just a record of the past, but a guide for the management of future. I realized the potential to eliminate inefficiency through $ c5 ^; f$ k; |0 p- W
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Now, as a recent graduate from law school and student with elementary accounting background, I am self-driven and
2 h6 i. G4 t# {7 nmotivated to enrich my theoretical and practical skills through your Program of Accounting which is a prestigious program
; F9 K1 b6 T1 v9 W. cacross the world. With your first-rate postgraduate education, I believe I will master the knowledge in both fields and
- Y2 R/ o+ u0 }+ g+ j, t. Afurthermore, by spending two and half years in a native English speaking country, my English will be as good as a local
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contribute my strength to the legal and commercial development in China.
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and downs. During the past sixteen years, some of my dreams came true while some of them failed, nonetheless, I have a
; d+ C7 r! V2 ?8 q( O1 T2 w9 kclear sense of what I am going to achieve in life and how I can reach them. Now, I am on my way to a new goal and
9 O' X1 q( c# X- p# [hopefully, I will reach my dream in your university.
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|7 e* P; B- `" K! P% f( D4 u 其实我的这篇写得也没啥特色，我找我们英语老师给看过，她的评语是:“Your PS is well-organized but not very
- Z" `' E+ H% E) d9 Z/ D- P& ?attractive. I think it is a bit longer than what is required. Besides, some parts are irrelevant and should be arranged in a
7 d& @4 Q) p; Z4 C9 X$ \) q Aproper way so as to make it coherent and appealing. By the way, you should emphasize your strength and touched your 0 H) f. F8 G2 O! h% ?
interest. This PS is scattered and the idea is not focused. You may write it from a different aspect, maybe it could be
! a% Q+ }7 X Z$ N* Q5 |better. The diction is okay and the language is polished. Hope to read your improved one.”: }( E2 y: X6 @" p8 }2 m+ t
不过PS在申请澳洲学校的过程中作用没有申请美国学校那么大，只要你写清了自己一些经历和学习的目的也就差不多了，字数也不用太多，我的PS实在太长了。可我写得那么辛苦，舍不得删掉。$ s: R$ |: R: \. ^. W/ ^ w; r2 [
跟简历一样，我在最后加上了Signature: Date: 并用手签，显得很特别。而且我在PS上还加了页眉： 5 ?( s; E* Q- E# M% f6 A- {
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2 a2 [" O# c4 I' G0 {0 ~无论怎样，写完后一定要找英语老师看一看，改一改。如果认识外国人，让他们帮你看看也不错。
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推荐信只有自己写的份，要老师写是不可能的。我一共写了5封 推荐信。当初的想法是我们系的老师3封，经管院的老师2封（我们上了很多经济方面的指选课和选修课）。如果申请有关法学的学位就用我们系的3封加经管院的1封，如果申请经济方面的就用经管院的2封加我们系的2封。其实不用这么多，一般2封就够了。不过你要是有时间又写得不错，多一点更有说服力嘛。（至少我是这么想的）。- l6 W1 v- u- N4 d
要写好推荐信的关键也是要多找例子来看。新东方出国留学系列的《留学申请推荐信写作模板》（包凡一、王薇编著，世界图书出版公司出版，2003版）对我的帮助很大。 我的很多句子都是源自这本书。注意写的时候一定要举一些例子，别一劲儿地吹。9 R) \1 E: t, s8 |/ f
还有最重要的是打印推荐信一定要用由学校信头的那种打印纸，如果实在没有就自己做。我想每个学校都有那种红头的信签纸吧，就照着那个做一模一样的。如果能找到校徽就更完美了。0 J, V7 i% O9 e
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