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Reggie 发表于 2008-7-15 01:46

看看3个conversations 的不同点吧

今天去找地方去修理我家的那个老破驴,问了几家修车地方的QUOTA,在南区, BROWNS PLAINS那里的 和CALAMVALE 那区些的,问了3家,3家的价格是不一样的,但是2家的SERVICE ATTITUDE是一样的. 唉!ySH:A$RI#|
SHOP A      (s=staff, r=reggie) 2f F[BT!A\4S
S: hey mate how is going?
9j9M5Y qT1o"k)XT R: not too bad yourself?
9u k'x$t3R_:U$PO S: what can i do for u today??S9h8w!w#L4q
R: im just wondering could i please get a quota for fixing up those parts for my car?
!L7tp5cIN2v F S: sure, i have a look for ya. alright this part needs ...... ..... ......,
3?-tV9Q V7O R: also how long does that take??3{eI\;W){v
S: about the whole day i say K}W_$i |'[
R: can you get a bit cheaper for that? coz it is a bit over my budget that the price u gave it to me,bp+X/kV U}/o
S: yup, i can do that, but takes whole day, then do another one free for u, how is that sound?.J H'n Lk+d g
R: sounds gud, ok i think about it, i will give u a call if i need any help from you guys
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S: no worries cya0w/i9m"z+i
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&A-dTyo,R\4X then 走到马路的对面另外一家. 去了以后第一印象没人理我! 唉~! 就当是看不到吧~! 虽然到这家几次了,态度还是那样,但是为了找个便宜的价格还是硬着头皮来了!!49.gif49.gif-g){h/wE0ke6vY

/r(NEly S: hey man
0Hh?[_3W$Z l R: hi how are you?  ( didnt hear me or ignore me)4~0L0a9o.}7Ba${#J
S: what can i do for you man?
"gS\nsZ[X V r R:  im just wondering could i please get a quota for fixing up those parts for my car?0Fh^ J;qo
S: ok i have a look. that costs that much .....................
)Uvzs b;]]$R R: how long does that take to fix the timing belt?
oq3sNKt S: whole day man
8yXJv(u3o R: can you tell me the approxmately hours that you are going to take?I9}?UFC c
S: come on man, i told u it needs whole day. bring your car in the morning, hopefully you can get it back in the afternoon
.DI X4j"go},r R: whats the trading hour?o6@c}Y*FL9]
S: 8-4 man.6j}^s,@-e
R: how long does that take it to book my car in?
(Zcd%WH[,E!B;W S: 3 days man
-} cco(X7Ar R: ok thanks a lot{K/@/q0@ Vo9t!ad
S: bye man
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lS|%g/F holy crap, 叫了多少次MAN,而且加上不耐烦的语气,TMD我去给你送钱,你竟然这样态度! 唉 ! TMD,我不就是ASIAN嘛,这里的ASIAN也不少的. 何必对人都那样,如果其他人对你,你又会怎样~! 鄙视那个中老年带眼睛的老男人~! 没礼貌
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i was waiting there about 5 mins, coz there was only an old dude with grey hair faxing one of the wheels for a small truck.3` {4OJ)}f
after 5 mins, two gentlemen have come out eventually.
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R: pretty good, how are you?!t/l%Y8^b;AJ4OdMo7p
S: not too bad, how can i help you?9AaK,eM
R:  im just wondering could i please get a quota for fixing up those parts for my car?5hF u KQH `
S: sure can i have a look at your paper?X3p"cN'D
R: yup, no problems*HZBlv!w2A s^-_cK
S: im not so sure with that part, but i can give you a quota for others
TU?+Iec,X R: right,  so how much does that cost to fix up my timing belt, and how long does that take?5AD,yO)F&k'T'c
S: normally timing belt you are looking at about $350 include labour, it takes about the whole day-]+[-~'Y!t;L'L6}
R: ok, but i will need my car about 4pm everyday. (K)_%l#jUP%p
S: i can do that if you take it in the early moring about 8am, then it should be alright by 4pm, also if i finish earlier, i will let you konw, then you can pick your car up. k^u$l X-^3h*DV
R: how about other parts?
Wd4?T:r(y K-f u S: they are like ......................
$V+GO3U.x!_5nrd R: can i get a business card from you? @$k0a x8P
S: sure, just ring up if you have any problems.
Y.PfNxK R: thanks very much
/L/JC[ y4x S: no worries, cya"~Dy"{4i9E
又是一家店,今天为了我那老家伙跑了3次. 也值得了,看清楚了一些人的店的, 看起来最后一家服务不错,价格也蛮好.
0o~lW'fB4YNI$K:q$^ 但是总体感觉今天3家的SERVICE ATTITUDES是 completely different.$K I JTQ
不能说是RACIST, 但是也是向那个方向了SHOP B的工作的人. ^{w/L'ApK*S
为什么同样是ASIAN,SERVICE 态度就变了太多了呢? 唉

小九 发表于 2008-7-15 18:50

没看出这个帖子的中心思想是什么,难道是给我们练英语阅读?
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但是看出楼主确实很无奈啊。。。50.gif
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Reggie 发表于 2008-7-15 22:08

回复 2# 小九 的帖子

对那里的一些是已经无奈了!!!!! 不会让人练英文的,因为我的也比较烂

erlengzi007 发表于 2008-7-18 18:41

大哥,你仔细看看你的英文段落,好多语法错误。我不是故意挑刺,不过总体意思介绍的还瞒清楚,还是支持一下。。。

erlengzi007 发表于 2008-7-18 18:47

two gentlemen have come out eventuallycome 应该是过去式至少。。。。coz it is a bit over my budget that the price u gave it to me这句有两个主语,两个动词,应该是两句的 ,或者你可以这么说the price is a bit over my budget,就可以拉didnt hear me or ignore me还有这句,前面是过去式,or后面怎么就现在式了  ?还有好几处就不多说了,不过thanks for sharing your story

Reggie 发表于 2008-7-19 00:50

回复 4# erlengzi007 的帖子

谢谢指出来的!! 因为知道自己写的烂的,但是那天实在是看不下去了,所以就写出来了

erlengzi007 发表于 2008-7-20 16:04

没关系的,很少有人象你在这里写大段英文,你还是瞒有实力的。。。。继续加油。

Reggie 发表于 2008-7-20 20:43

回复 7# erlengzi007 的帖子

谢谢,在下不才,希望各位指教~~~

自由de鱼 发表于 2008-7-23 22:43

修车可以找我,小的WORK SHOP,但绝对保证质量和价钱~~52.gif

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